Tuesdays with Story
June 7, 2020
The first word . . .
“I feel devoutly thankful to have been born fond of writing.”
― Winston Churchill
Zoom-zoom . . .
Zoom isn’t without its problems. Delayed voice transmissions and audio breakups forced John to leave Tuesday evening’s meeting early. Here are summaries of the critiques those who were on the schedule received:
— John Schneller (chapter 20, Broken rewrite)
While I have tried to embrace the RUE (Resist the Urge to Explain) concept, my minimalist approach left most readers guessing Broken’s distrust, the thief and murderer qualities of the shepherds, the subversive technique to convince the ewe to accept a lamb not her own, and why did he reach into the pouch and bring out nothing (visible). Looks like I has some esplainin to do! (me no edit John’s righting) Thanks for the input. John (more…)