Tuesdays with Story
June 21, 2020
The first word . . .
“You may well ask me why…I took time to write [books]. I can only reply that I do to know. There was no why about it. I had to: that was all.
― George Bernard Shaw
Zooming in from New York . . .
TWS alumnae Jaime Nelson Noven joined the group Tuesday evening from NYC where she works as a promotion pro for a new imprint at MacMillan. She will now be a regular with us for a long as we meet on Zoom. We had a full house for critiques. Here is some of what was said:
— Kashmira Sheth and Amit Trivedi
Story of Ba and Virabha would be better if conveyed in section alternating with present events. Transition after Ba and Virabha’s marriage to losing their son is abrupt. This chapter has added depth to Virabha’s and Ba’s character and fits well in the overall story. Thanks all! (more…)
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